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Entry tags:
SH edit, fourth update
Base Document: Version 1
Editing Type: Structual
Progress: 7287 words out of 9555 total words processed.
Notes: The fifth and sixth sections were dealt with. I made a major structural change in that i merged those two sections into one. Thanks to my noble editors whom inspired this because it was certainly needed.
I found a continuity error of doom in there. I said that "A few days" had passed between Sagun and Michael's pronouncement in section 5. In section 6, immediatly after that pronouncement, Narmiel had a flashback of a scene that happened a "while back" yet that scene could have only taken place post-Sagun. *shakes head* So glad i caught that one.
Editing Type: Structual
Progress: 7287 words out of 9555 total words processed.
Notes: The fifth and sixth sections were dealt with. I made a major structural change in that i merged those two sections into one. Thanks to my noble editors whom inspired this because it was certainly needed.
I found a continuity error of doom in there. I said that "A few days" had passed between Sagun and Michael's pronouncement in section 5. In section 6, immediatly after that pronouncement, Narmiel had a flashback of a scene that happened a "while back" yet that scene could have only taken place post-Sagun. *shakes head* So glad i caught that one.